Grammar issues, spelling mistakes, text and paragraph formatting was horrid to name but a few. Hot xxx 18 So shitty one this strory Chow wan say no more write strory stinkys so like much shit!!!!!anonymous readerReport 2013-09-05 20:19:37Here’s the best constructive criticism I can give you, don’t bother submitting anything else until you learn how to spell, use correct grammar, and have content that doesn’t suck ass!!!!!!!«1» So shitty one this strory Chow wan say no more write strory stinkys so like much shit!!!!!anonymous readerReport 2013-09-05 20:19:37Here’s the best constructive criticism I can give you, don’t bother submitting anything else until you learn how to spell, use correct grammar, and have content that doesn’t suck ass!!!!!!!«1» 3 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-09-06 09:58:20The overall premise of the story was good, but it was the presentation that needs a lot of work.
