I suggest proof reading it before you publish it.READERReport 2007-10-21 12:31:12I’m working on a second, any tips suggestions? Hot xxx 18 910«12» ^_^ good plot line though.READERReport 2007-10-13 10:38:09Thanks I copied and pasted it to word to use spell check!READERReport 2007-10-12 10:43:22you have gotten so much better! ^_^ good plot line though.READERReport 2007-10-13 10:38:09Thanks I copied and pasted it to word to use spell check!READERReport 2007-10-12 10:43:22you have gotten so much better! Anything you want to see from any of the characters?READERReport 2007-10-20 00:16:14meh, it was okay… 8 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2008-08-23 21:35:41Well its way better than the other ones. I suggest proof reading it before you publish it.READERReport 2007-10-21 12:31:12I’m working on a second, any tips suggestions? you don’t have very many mistakes at all! 910«12» too many grammar mistakes for my taste. ^_^ good plot line though.READERReport 2007-10-13 10:38:09Thanks I copied and pasted it to word to use spell check!READERReport 2007-10-12 10:43:22you have
