Don’t change a thing with your writing style; even the somewhat less than perfect, yet realistic endings add a level of depth that most stories on this sight are missing. ficiotn or fact doesn’t rally matter to me. XXX Hot HD 19 comments«1234»Anonymous readerReport 2014-11-20 23:43:40That was a sensational story, beautifully written, flowed perfectly, I don’t think I’ve read such an accomplished story here, you should never stop writing you have a great talent ! Thanks though for the fab post, your work is easy to read even though they’re really long , its a pleasure I like ’em long !! *****anonymous readerReport 2011-04-22 01:26:02I think it was a great story but i would like to suggest a part two where the four of them get together every once in a while but mary and peter are still just as in love with each other but
