Makes for hard reading when having to move it.«12» You should have been a little more forthcoming on their being chased & given more info on how their army grew by meeting certain characters and why they picked that town, etc..anonymous readerReport 2012-01-06 19:28:24The dashed line is too long as it kicks in the horizontal scrollbar at the bottom, keep it shorter. XXX Hot HD 7 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2015-10-19 02:45:13You should use smaller paragraphs for good impressionanonymous readerReport 2012-10-22 21:09:56alittle corny but it is really good. i lov werwolves!anonymous readerReport 2012-07-06 16:15:48Omg yal have no lifesEd ItorReport 2012-01-07 11:19:08Spelling & Grammar errors can be lessened by using “Word” or similar program. 7 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2015-10-19 02:45:13You should use smaller paragraphs for good impressionanonymous readerReport 2012-10-22 21:09:56alittle corny but it is really good.
