Keep up the great work and let me know when you post another story please,thanks..READERReport 2005-04-06 00:44:12You’ve got the right ideas. Just my thoughts. Hot xxx Just my thoughts. Just my thoughts. My problem was that there was no real development to the story. My problem was that there was no real development to the story. No real beginning middle or end. Just my thoughts. I’ve not been published so, what do I know? You have talent, it simply needs to be refined. More physical contact? I know that I am addicted to reading, literature of all sorts. Keep up the great work and let me know when you post another story please,thanks..READERReport 2005-04-06 00:44:12You’ve got the right ideas. No real beginning middle or end. Keep plugging!!!!! I’ve not been published so, what do I know?
