How are Gina & Tina related. How are Gina & Tina related. XXX Hot 6 comments«12»Dudley DowrongReport 2018-06-15 20:47:56I think you need to better identify & develop characters. Don’t know if this will help your writing techniques or not. Read.”mypenname3000, Tina Kerr 36, Louderthansound, to name a few to get the feel of what I’m trying to say to help you write better (for my slow mind). Starting off, to me it was so confusing, I didn’t even get deep into the story. A reader shouldn’t have to read the story 2-3 times to learn the characters & their relationship to each other (including the 1st person telling the story).
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