Also can someone point out the spelling and grammatical errors (other than the weirds A’s) in my stories because i just put this through a spell check on Microsoft word and there were no mistakes???anonymous readerReport 2012-12-03 00:27:51Good story but leave the  out of the storyanonymous readerReport 2012-12-02 23:19:06I gave you a positive rating because your subject matter has promise and this story definitely needs to be continued. Hot xxx 18 Not perfect but a very good read ! I’am very sorry about the weird A’s but they were not there when I submitted the stories so can any members on this that knows how i can take them out because i want all my stories to be the best for you guys. Your writing shows some talent, so don’t give up.anonymous readerReport 2012-12-02 20:52:17I’m wondering if English is your first language, if it is you




















