Pretend that someone else wrote it and actively look for flaws. Pretend that someone else wrote it and actively look for flaws. XXX Hot Pretend that someone else wrote it and actively look for flaws. Furthermore, a sister being caught with the family dog’s cock buried in her cunt and fucking her doesn’t just smile amiably and say “Come here.” She’d be scared shitless for being busted. which would have been the more logical way to tell it. Like someone wrote, girls don’t cum out of their asses. In the future, stop and objectively read your story before you submit it. When you can’t find any, it’s ready to be submitted.Anonymous readerReport 2009-08-20 22:02:13wasn’t bad for your first oneAnonymous readerReport 2009-04-24 00:14:53More detail needed and needs better endingAnonymous readerReport 2009-04-23 01:34:54NO GOOD!!!!!!!!Anonymous readerReport 2009-04-22 19:08:58more detail and a little longer please, also you should try to include
